Revision

This artifact represents a revised version of my research proposal on visual editing techniques in sports highlight videos on Instagram and TikTok. I included it because it shows how my ideas developed and became more focused after revising my earlier work. In this revision, I refined my research question, clarified my explanation of visual and audio elements, and improved the organization of my methodology so that my textual analysis is easier to understand. Readers should notice how I narrowed my focus to specific editing techniques such as camera angles, slow motion, pacing, text overlays, motion graphics, and transitions, and how I more clearly explained how these elements influence audience emotions and interpretation. This artifact demonstrates my ability to revise my writing intentionally in order to strengthen clarity, focus, and overall argument.